but even as a designer she has failed to demonstrate good design sense. All she has demonstrated is that she's good at copying the en vogue style.
Can somebody explain what's wrong with this design?
As it stands, all I can say about her is that she has decent mastery of Photoshop but no understanding of good design.
The message this resume is communicating is that the author also feels that design is just about ornamentation, and the only way it could be more obvious is if the diagram were in the shape of a giant duck. I have to assume she doesn't actually believe that, not least since she hasn't asked for us to psychoanalyse her and it's really, really unfair to try to do so based on this completely decontextualised link. But even so, the design seems unsuccessful to me because it's communicating the wrong message.