I found the "Money" page (https://imgz.org/money/ )'s marketing style extremely distasteful and offensive.
I understand the author is trying to be cool and all, but this is too much by piling up vulgar words all over, IMO.
I understand the author is trying to be cool and all, but this is too much by piling up vulgar words all over, IMO.
"Limited offer. {random(2, 100)} just bough this plan."
That's not to say that this site may be headed there as well, but at least we can enjoy some irreverent copy in the meantime.
This would qualify as PG if it were a movie. I mean, you like what you like, but how much cussing is "just enough" for you?
It's been a while since I read all of it at once, though, I wil re-read and adjust, thanks.
If this is your hobby project, I doubt you are looking for enterprise signups who are pretty anal about such things. This will mostly used by individuals, who mostly wouldn't mind at worst, or be amused by it at best.
I, too, dislike people who try to be funny by cursing, because it feels facile. I just read the copy again now and there were a few cases where the cursing felt gratuitous, rather than for a specific effect, so I have changed those.
I understand the you are trying to be cool and all, but this is too much by piling up vulgar words ("anal") all over, IMO.
EDIT: @StavrosK, consider making the "From" set in your hello email to something prettier than "hello"