That said:
1. This is bikeshedding, but you cannot make a statement like "diagram is the code, code is the diagram" and not show how to actually do that. The home page even has a sequence diagram. If you meant that the written code looks like a sequence diagram if you squint, then say that.
2. What makes this a Perlis language? I knew every term in the by example summary [1]. Is it annotating functions as services with metadata, or in-language support for xml/json, websockets/http2, etc? How is that different from other batteries-included languages like wolfram, for example?
3. Related: the problem with a batteries included language is that it gets bigger and bigger over time; hence the idea of "small language, large library base". What will you do with the language when its usage pivots over time - add more batteries as standard?
4. Minor: Many links to GH on the community guide page [2] end in 404s.
[1] https://v1-0.ballerina.io/learn/by-example/ [2] https://v1-0.ballerina.io/community/