Some hopefully constructive criticism:
- The light gray, low contrast theme makes it harder to read and also look washed out.
- Fonts and kerning tend to be handled better in latex, e.g. moderncv
- Having a non-open source license is of course your choice, but makes this quite unattractive to use (is it still going to be around in a few years? Will anyone maintain non-free software if you lose interest?)