1) It seems you're selling location details for businesses and other places of interest? Make it extremely clear that this is not people. Also need much more detail on the source, legality and quality of this data.
2) Remove the fish/pond/bait naming. It's not a game, and these terms and descriptions just make it harder to understand and look unprofessional. Stick with normal terms like credits/lists/locations, etc.
3) Location and geographic data is an extremely competitive field. You need to figure out exactly who you're selling to and why. It seems you're going after self-service individuals/small-businesses market. Beware that there will be lots of unscrupulous and shady characters in this segment.
4) After the above, figure out your pricing and make it clear.
5) HN is not the best place to show this. Try some of the marketing forums and chatrooms to get feedback.