> The device is thin, as far as tablets go, at 5.4 mm, unfolded. Closed, it’s nearly double that, at 11 mm.
11mm is _more_ than double 5.4mm.
> with a 19:5 aspect ration.
Aspect ration? Are aspects now too precious to waste?
> ...as Richard You takes the stage...
> ...according to mobile CEO Richard Yu...
Could we at least get some consistency in proper noun transliterations?
There's so much more that I feel like I'm reading an article published by a middle-school student. If so, then he did a great job. If this is supposed to be a professional journalist, though, then he should go back to middle school.