I like his perspective and agree with many of his points, but his writing style needs some work.

It’s a blog post about ham radio, not a cringy thesis paper.

Short snippet: >Next, as we seek those truths, let’s examine what an axiom is. An axiom is short hand for a kernel of truth. A poster sign. It is a spoken reduction of events and their goals that are self evident. Personal mastery and their axioms feed on one another. And the axioms contain vocabularies which allow us to understand skill and culture.

It’s far too academic and elevated for the medium (buh-boosh), and frankly it even borders on pretentious