https://medium.com/@jessehorne/a-nomad-story-c50a499b4866
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Having actually read the article I suggest you consider how much you want to be a developer and how much you want to be an activist. Your lifestyle seems so unstable that I imagine a lot of people would read the article and say to themselves “No way am I hiring this person.”
The message you want to send may be different but the message I’m receiving is not of a digital nomad, someone who’s making a living off the internet. It’s of a drifter, loosely attached not just to the labour market, but to people and places generally.
On the writing itself there’s not that much structure. Beginning, middle and end are lacking. There’s no message or story. It’s a succession of events. Also, you have multiple eggcorns in your writing, where you misheard speech and wrote it down as you heard it, rather than as the expression usually goes.
> I told them that I was looking for other opportunities and their draw dropped.
It’s jaw, their jaw dropped.
All that said you’ve done a lot of writing on medium, way more than I’ve done anywhere but commenting. Good luck and keep going.