Yep that's one of my best "Italian sentence construction translated in English" piece... Sorry, it often comes out like that when I write impulsively.
I speak Spanish and it all sounded very natural to me... :-)
Naturally :-D
It was liked by me. A post very good.
It reminded me of your article [1] (English has been my pain for 15 years). As a non-English speaker, sometimes I wonder if my readers (& clients) do not understand the context or my English.