Will you please give critical feedback?

Hello, Yes, I am asking you for your unyieldingly honest and critical feedback that the internet and this community is such a great resource for.

I’ve been working on a side project for the past year - a “book” that I’d like to complete and publish to the world (for free on the internet). Before then, I would like as much feedback as I can get in order to revise.

This “book” is a coloring book about math that is both digital and on paper. Web version: http://coloring-book.co Printable PDF: http://coloring-book.co/book.pdf

On paper, the reader can color in patterns that help illustrate the mathematical concepts presented. The web version brings these illustrations to live in interactive animations.

Your critical, constructive feedback about anything ranging from writing nitpicks to design or content structure, or anything in between would be so appreciated!

Please comment away or email me at colorByMath@gmail.com or leave feedback in this form: http://coloring-book.co/form

THANK YOU FOR YOUR BRUTAL HONESTY <3

On the layout-you make your "pages" trigger a scroll, but don't allow me to scroll my self. Not a fan. If you want to use something like that, and approximate a book, I would be more comfortable with a horizontal animation. With that I have less of an expectation to be able to scroll, and it _feels_ more book like.