I could be totally off base here as I have no real experience with clojure, but this intro sentence threw me off right away.
>Ions let you develop applications for the cloud by deploying your code to a running Datomic cluster
What is an ion? What is a "datomic cluster"? Are these terms just new jargon for what is essentially a deployment system? If they're a clojure thing then ok, but a quick search makes me think they're not. I understand software and I understand deployment. I read the rest of the page and I feel like I would have to problem understanding what this really is if they cut down on the jargon.