I made it about halfway through your manifesto before I gave up. Mind if I give you a couple of pieces of unsolicited advice??
1.) Find a good proofreader. This proofreader will ideally know a great deal about the decentralized economy.
2.) Stop attacking centralized apps. Trashing different architectures is not persuasive. If anything, it does the opposite because intelligent readers will start thinking of counterpoints when they should be digesting your arguments.