Straight off the bat the most glaring problem with that statement is that Linq is not part of C# in any way shape or form since all C# code is compiled to bytecode, it would be literally impossible for C# to have Linq and for it to not be available for the rest of the languages supported by dotNet. The funny part is the expressive form of Linq that reads like a sentence is not even fully supported by C#! Only VB.Net has fully implemented Linq expressiveness.
There are many more reasons that argument is wrong, but I feel just pointing out that one above shows how far off it is.
In my experience its almost always best to shy away from hyping your idea of better by knocking the competition, your article stands well on its own and C# has so many obvious flaws that theres no need to add to it. Stick to whats good about X, not whats crappy about alternative Y.
Again all in all an interesting read since im not familiar with Clojure, but I just had to nitpick.