Review My App: An iPhone game about "Knowledge and Enlightenment" (Upcoming)
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This is my upcoming game/app. It's based on an existing Wiki game, and modified to reinforced the cognitive process of "learning through connections". So far, I have personally learned a lot while developing this game (e.g. "pines" are "coniferous trees", and "coniferous trees" lives in "northern hemisphere".).
It would be nice to have some early feedback and suggestions. The app should be out in couple weeks. By then I will put out some free copies for fellow Hacker Newers.
Thanks,
Ivan
thanks for noticing it.
There's no privacy information on your preview page. While I personally have faith that most people posting here on HN asking for feedback would not sell my email address to Russian gangsters, it might be an idea to address such issues explicitly.
I think though, that having a limited set of choices will influence the votes. People will pick the middle one. You should have a fill-in box.
I see this problem all the time with people trying to implement the "wisdom of the crowds" or market concepts. It is important that people make their decision in isolation of other people's opinion. Otherwise social pressure and other factors distorts the outcome.
Any reason you decided to do this as an iOS App instead of a as a Web App?
Behind the scene, the logistics is actually mostly server-based, using Cocoa just for the eye candies. So it is really easy to convert it into a web app or onto Android.
Try to take this fact as validation of your concept. TheWikiGame's interface is a bit clunky. So if you do it better, more power to you.
It's hard to tell how you think your game is going to work... it's not obvious to me how "enlightenment" motivates players, but you never know. I rather like TheWikiGame's beat-the-clock dramatic tension, and that one plays against others. TheWikiGame can be addictive especially if you play it with other friends in the room suggesting strategies.
I actually built a very similar system about two years ago, when I was screwing around with the Wikipedia dataset as a playground for some graph theory experiments, but it never occurred to me to make it into an iPhone app. Brilliant move.
If you're looking to make an "advanced" version, I coded a variation where each page was weighted by the number of in-bound links from other pages, and the goal was to minimize the weighted path. I found that led to some interesting lateral thinking to find more obscure connections between topics.
Looking forward to your game.