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And you made the front page, I think you nailed it :)

Using "obsessive co-founder" instead would have probably been fine. Still, you meant no harm. :)

If it's any consolation, I like the final iteration the most.

Is he going to write a blog post about his co-founder's obsessive attention to titles?

On a more serious note he needs to do a bit of tweaking with the contrast - the thin pale grey text doesn't stand out well against a white background on my monitor and the tagline below the logo is virtually unreadable.

FWIW I also think slide 8 is a cleaner design than the current iteration - the logo in the finished version looks a bit squashed and I think the left hand menu is more distracting than it needs to be.