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Terrible doc writing.

'For your territory to be a part of Royaume, the land ordinance requires construction of a building (container), specifically a castle, from which your territory’s lord (agent)* rules.'

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It's a blog post and not docs. I don't think it's unreasonable to spice up blog posts whereas docs should be straight-up.

Of course it's not unreasonable to do that. The problem is that the analogy was a terrible one.

Suggestions on how to improve it?

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