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Something about your phrasing reminded me of the customer reviews for the "three wolves" t-shirt on Amazon [1]. Thanks for brightening my day!

[1] https://www.amazon.com/Mountain-Three-Wolf-Short-Sleeve/prod...

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please let me know how can I improve my phrasing, what mistakes I made, I am not a native speaker so I am aware I can build my phrases in a weird way.

Just trying to help. I'm not an English major or anything myself, but here is one issue I noticed.

Don't overuse commas. After you get a complete idea out there, just end and start a new sentence. For example: "Please let me know how I can improve my phrasing and what mistakes I made. I am not a native speaker, so I am aware I can build my phrases in a weird way."

Good to know, thanks.

The book that really help me gain confidence in writing is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Elements_of_Style.

It is a small book that can be read in an afternoon - you can probably find pdfs online.

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