I'm going to be honest, moxie. I'm a big fan of your work, and I basically agree with everything you've stated here as someone who works in the security industry. I don't particularly like Telegram, and I encourage use of Signal where possible. Just last week I was defending Signal on HN[1].
However, I think you shouldn't be bringing up Telegram here. The article does not mention Telegram by name, and I think that bringing it up here, as one of the developers of the Signal Protocol, distracts from your point. Holy war threads between Signal and Telegram bubble up on occasion on Hacker News, and people are basically aware of who you are. As an outside observer, bringing up Telegram in the way you did comes across as preternaturally defensive whataboutism.
I think you could have expressed your points about the security industry's disincentives (which are legitimate observations, in my opinion) without using Telegram as an example. But bringing up Telegram instantly shifts the focus away from Whatsapp, Signal and latent problems in the security industry; instead, it becomes the usual Signal vs Telegram circus. I don't think that's a particularly persuasive way to forward your points.
To reiterate: I agree with what you're saying, but I think that it's very likely your comment will be perceived in a way that you don't intend, to the detriment of persuasion.
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