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Suggestions for improvements:

Change the headline on your landing page to clearly say what you do. E.g. add "Bespoke web sites for dog trainers" after the "More ..." bit.

The CTA at the bottom is easy to miss on skimming. Make that bigger.

Dog training ERS might be more familiar with the word "custom" than "bespoke."

Great, I will split test ;)

Thanks for your input friend :)

This is such a useful input. Thanks mate, I will update the copy of landing page tomorrow. :)