Looking for advice on improving documentation/community posts

Hey there guys, I'm currently doing my first internship, and just finished documenting my first project with AWS IoT.

The company I work for focuses on developing a security module for the Raspberry Pi that holds an embedded private key that cannot be read/exported and I did a write-up on how to use this key to authenticate with AWS IoT.

Just wanted to get some feedback on I can improve documentation/community posts. Since I've been so head deep in this project I just wanted some fresh perspectives, thanks!

Here's the link to my community post: https://community.zymbit.com/t/aws-iot-authentication-and-data-publishing-with-zymkey-4i-certificate/214