Ask HN: Review my prelaunch sign-up page
There doesn't seem to be very much written about how to best design prelaunch sign-up pages (especially for marketplace type sites where pre-launch momentum is critical to avoid the chicken&egg problem) beyond simple A/B testing guidelines, so it'd be great if I could get some feedback on what works/doesn't work.
I've made an attempt to mimic the "long sales letter" style pages that apparently convert well for ebooks, etc. But I'm not personally convinced that's the right approach for tech-savy users.