This kind of sweeping unsupported assertion is actively harmful for FP evangelists. Anyone who isn't already a fanboy is most likely going to read that and say “clearly this person has no idea what they're talking about. [close tab]”.
If you want to make a productive form of this argument it'd be better to focus on discussing why the mathematical abstractions are so much better with comparisons to their actual recommended OOP counterparts. The points you mentioned about things like side effects or immutability are good but you need to not give someone a reason to go away before getting there, especially since there are going to be common tasks like I/O which are _not_ going to look like an improvement for anyone who isn't already on-board.