2. I'm not sure what 'story' means in this context. While it sounds good, it makes me uncertain about what Vizbi is and the landing page doesn't really help pin it down. For example 'with or without code' doesn't clarify it.
3. Don't misunderstand me, I love creative prose and the turn of the phrase. But when I look at a tool, I want to know what it does and why I should care.
4. I hit the Vizbi page and the headline is two statements which are not clear about what it does and why I should care. Most of my screen is wasted on a picture of hands and a laptop on a desk: it's completely irrelevant to my interests.
5. Don't misunderstand me, I love graphic design. But here it seems to exist for it's own sake. Just tell me about the product.
6. Since Vizbi tells stories, tell me the story with Vizbi...this is showing me what it does. http://weblog.raganwald.com/2008/05/show-dont-tell.html
Good luck.