Tom Wolfe’s reflections on language
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My general problem with Wolfe is his creation of fiction from historical events while referring to them as historical. If you've ever read The Electric Kool-Aid Acid Test by Wolfe, the big argument between Kesey and Leary never actually happened. Wolfe just made it up and presented it as historical fact.
I expect this book to be more of the same. There's a line between artistic license and lying, and Wolfe has proven repeatedly he does not respect this line.
I'm not a big Chomsky fan. On the other hand, using Everett as an attack on Chomsky doesn't work; Everett is a bit sketchy and one language does not provide a counter example.
But I admit I haven't studied Chomsky in detail. I do know a fair bit about Darwin, though, and if this is accurate, Wolfe's whole book can be discarded without fear of missing anything.
"There is some genetic factor that distinguishes humans from other animals, and [it] is language specific. The theory of that genetic component, whatever it turns out to be, is what is called Universal Grammar"
This is a good place to start: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/12626.On_Language
http://www.scientificamerican.com/article/evidence-rebuts-ch...
The article you linked to doesn't really get to the core of the Universal Grammar idea; as Chomsky describes it: "There is some genetic factor that distinguishes humans from other animals, and [it] is language specific. The theory of that genetic component, whatever it turns out to be, is what is called Universal Grammar"
I don't necessarily disagree with that at all. However it could have been more effectively said with half as many words and fewer clever quips.
I am very willing to put in the effort, if I get any sense that the author has put in some as well. Don't blame readers for not wanting to slog through lazy writing.
"Perhaps you, like I, read The Voyage of the Beagle and found it to be a remarkable triumph of literature and naturalism and science and, dare I say it, the intellect."
with
"The Voyage of the Beagle was a triumph of literature, naturalism and intellect."
Not one fact deleted. There's no accounting for taste -- maybe you like crap writing. But worthwhile ideas remain so even when presented in simple declarative sentences.
> with
> "The Voyage of the Beagle was a triumph of literature, naturalism and intellect."
> Not one fact deleted. There's no accounting for taste
Which is, in fact, the thing deleted (that is, the former version expressly emphasizes that the conclusion it offers is an opinion -- even as it clearly expects the reader to recognize that it is a quite common one, and that the author expects the reader to be likely to share it -- and the latter suggests it is a simple statement of fact.)
> But worthwhile ideas remain so even when presented in simple declarative sentences.
Yes, but sometimes changing the sentence structure also -- as in the example you present -- substantially alters the idea being presented.
Consider your response to me. If you had left it at "Which is the thing deleted" your point would have been well and cleverly made. But you go on to undermine it with a less clear parenthetical exposition of 50+ words (1 sentence!)
about the only thing i have gathered from it is the author doesn't like wolfe's ideas very much.