The Rise of the Platform Economy
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> IT-enabled services transformation, as our colleagues Stuart Feldman, Kenji Kushida, Jonathan Murray, and Niels Christian Nielsen have argued in other venues, was based on the application of an array of computable algorithms to myriad activities, from consumption and leisure to services and manufacturing. The movement of these algorithms to the cloud, where they can be easily accessed, created the infrastructure on which, and out of which, entire platform-based markets and ecosystems operate. Platforms and the cloud, an essential part of what has been called the “third globalization,” reconfigure globalization itself.
... the platform operator has ... control over the ... work, while ... claiming to be only an intermediary. ... As the power is centralized, the platform owner can become a ... monopolist. ... The platform owner can squeeze the platform community — the ... participants in the ecosystem who are ... creating the value ...
(There's also a long digression on "robots will take all the jobs", but that belonged in a different article.)
this clunker of a sentence stood out...
Airbnb and Uber use these newly available cloud tools to force deep changes in a variety of incumbent businesses
It's not that these writers incapable of writing succinctly ..I think there is a premium in academia on verbosity.
Because few were taught good writing style, whereas all were told to pad their writing and use 10-dollar words so it looks "academic" and makes for a longer (scientific) paper.
(I shouldn't speak though, since english is not my first language, and when commenting fast, as I usually do on HN, I always make tons of typos and syntactic mistakes).
Simply put, you are not the intended audience for the paper or it would have been written in the style you prefer. See: Malcolm Gladwell.
1) You need to be exactly at the article length limit. Usually means cutting out a lot of detail and gentle explanations you had in your first draft, but might also mean a need to pad a bit.
2) You need to cite everyone who is probable to be your peer reviewer.
from a recent HN story, "What I learned as a hired consultant to autodidact physicists" https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=12268362
I remember that the best written articles are typically also from tenured professors leading the field they were writing about, and who would not need to worry about bad peer reviews or other ways their articles would be assessed. (Which leads to the question of they became tenured because of their great communication, or if they are finally free to communicate normally now that they've reached a tenured position)
Even New Egg is a resellers shop now, similar to Amazon and eBay.