YOUR TEXT:
"We provide QA outsourcing services especially focused towards startups."
MY QA:
Replace "QA" with "Quality Assurance".
Add a comma after "services".
Replace "towards" with "toward".
YOUR TEXT:
"With our good value services in the area of QA , you get to have excellent value for money while you focus on your core business."
MY QA:
Replace "good value services in the area of QA" with "high quality QA services".
Eliminate "to have".
Add "your" before "money".
Replace "while" with "so that you can".
YOUR TEXT:
"Some of the services are, 1- Functional Testing 2- Automation Testing 3- Usability Testing 4- Performance Testing 5- Security Testing"
MY QA:
Replace "the services are" with "our testing services include".
Remove all 5 instances of "Testing".
Put commas after each phrase.
Add a period at the end of the sentence.
YOUR TEXT:
Oh! and what else you would want us to have in our services especially for your needs? Any ideas?
MY QA:
Delete this sentence when you get done laughing.
YOUR TEXT:
"Check out our website for more detail and we would be more than happy to have your ideas developed as our capabilities too."
MY QA:
Add a period after "detail".
Delete "and" and capitalize "we" to begin a new sentence.
Delete "more than".
Delete "to have your ideas developed as our capabilities too."
YOUR TEXT:
"Cheers! Khurram Mir www.kraysis.com khurram@kraysis.com"
Replace "Cheers!" with "Thank you." unless you are drinking (which I am about to do).