Is there any reason an experience from "restaurants" is meaningful in the context of what the article is about? At the very least I see not even an effort from you, as if it's all the same. It seems to me that those are entirely different categories. For example, the restaurant business is highly competitive, people can easily go elsewhere.
Regarding the article though, I wonder what the purpose of spending 99% of the budget for the article on visuals rather than the actual article was. That's a really lame piece of pseudo-"journalism". It provides a very weak argument (if any), which is unfortunate given the importance of the topic.