OK, some feedback - this will sound harsh, but it's how it happened ...
I can't understand the first 10 seconds of speech because I haven't yet got used to the accent and tone. Then it's 52 seconds before I get any clue as to what it's about. I nearly gave up at 40 seconds.
Then at 1:05 it looks like things I know, and it's 1:12 before you say that it's not something I know, it's different, and I still don't know what it's doing.
For someone who's looking to invest, maybe they'll sit through it, but for me, I'm out. Probably it's cool and useful and interesting, but I've got other things to do.
Finally, you might want to resubmit, putting the URL in the URL field, your request for feedback in the title, and then expand on your reasons and request in a comment. Then two things happen. Firstly, it's automatically clickable.
Secondly, you don't get penalized in the rankings for not submitting a URL.