Ask HN: Investor Animated Video – draft critiques wanted

Hi all, the thing I'm building is very complex and I have a difficult time simplifying it for potential investors and customers. Yes, I know a lot of people wouldn't say this is a MVP. To me this is. The point is to provide a better social network that is ad-free, allows for anonymous use (and free), encrypted group voice chat/messaging, calendaring, mapping and some AI magic for interrupting the social flow (safety and efficiency). It's targeting women in social/sporting clubs that travel together. How can I really grab audience attention with a short pitch on this?

I made a simplified animated video (draft form) to help explain what it is. Any feedback and definitely suggestions for a simple "what it is" line to catch investors' attention would be super helpful. Thanks! And I understand this might be brutal, so please be honest.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/e8zm79m566wnftg/11.mov?dl=0