I did appreciate it - as I say, a diverting read - but I agree that HN is the wrong audience. At least, until you tie it in with hacking or startups or investigations or something with some bite.
I occasionally post things like this: http://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=1113300
It usually gets a comment or two such as can be found there saying that it more correctly belongs on reddit, say. My reply there sums up my attitude as to why I think it is interesting.
But I have found here on HN that if you don't make those observations explicitly, if you don't start to do some analysis that leads from the original, then people will dismiss it as "Diverting, but content-free and not appropriate."
So, can you actually apply it to this audience? Are there lessons to learn (apart from the obvious "Don't get office space that requires an elevator) ??
Just my $0.02.