Ask HN: Review my startup: Conflict-free, multi-master file replication
synctus.com
synctus.com
If that's what you're doing, I see the value: you're the Drobo to Riverbed's NetApp.
I'd worry a bit that your typical customers --- law firms, doctors offices --- aren't going to understand what you have up there. You need to do the "Feature/Function/Benefit" exercise (what it is, how it works, how it makes money for your customer), and then write your copy based on the benefits, not the details of how you sync. Your "benefits" section is still too technical, where it isn't, it's too fuzzy.
For me, the biggest win to something like this would be not having to have employees dick around with VPNs. You get one connection set up, not 50, and everyone has access to the same files.
You've got me exactly.
> Your "benefits" section is still too technical, where it isn't, it's too fuzzy.
I agree - I've been struggling a lot with the copy. When I try and make it less technical it ends up being fuzzy. I'm interested in hiring a copywriter if I can get any good recommendations.
Separate the technical and non-technical out into separate pages. The technical stuff can then get as technical as you want.
That being said, this is a great thing to offer as an appliance. I think that someone who's savvy enough to look for this, though, would probably not want to buy until you have a clearer story about how to do backups. Can I, e.g. install Mozy or equivalent, on the theory that your customer is looking to get rid of sysadmin headaches?
I kinda get that feeling too. Maybe use more blue text/background instead of red (blue is a more corporate colour), and make the site look a bit more busy -- it looks kinda simple at the moment which I guess appeals more to techies than corporate types. Disclaimer: IANA graphic designer either.
Thanks, I'll work on making it clearer, and review the design too.
From the point of view of a single office, the device is just a NAS, so any backup solution that can back up a NAS will work - including Mozy and traditional stuff like Veritas.
Somewhat separately, do you care at all about selling to companies that might otherwise consider a more heavyweight solution like setting up an NFS volume that everyone mounts? You have a clear ease-of-use-and-maintenance win, but it'd require separate marketing to a different kind of audience so as not to confuse people who don't even know what that is.
In theory, you could accomplish offline access in JD with syncing, but I don't yet trust their sync features for anything critical.
1) Too geeky language - rather tell a story Company XYZ solved a problem by...
2) Design needs work
3) Call for action on landing page missing
4) Let the Customer touch the product (Tour/demo/video)
5) Put all technical details in white papers - the IT guys will try and rip them apart.
Who are most likely to be your Customers?
The page given is the technical detail. The front page of the site http://www.synctus.com/ is less geeky.
Do you mean the "Tech" site or the rest of the site? I linked directly to the Tech page which is intended for geeks because I figured that HN readers would want to read that first. I'm not using it as a landing page for any other purpose. Or do I need to make the other sections less geeky too?
> 5) Put all technical details in white papers - the IT guys will try and rip them apart.
Do you mean more technical detail than I have, or to move my Tech section into white papers? I intended to put all the technical information in multiple HTML hyperlinked pages rather than as PDF downloads. Is this what you mean - would PDF downloads be better?
I'll work on the rest - thanks!
> Who are most likely to be your Customers?
I'm aiming at small businesses with little or no in-house technical knowledge. However, I'm thinking about splitting marketing between them and technical people who can advise them.
I personally prefer HTML to PDF. YMMV.
I thought you targeting small businesses use real examples. What would be the benefit for example to a small Architectural firm working in three Cities. Why is it better than just storing documents up in the Cloud and using ftp etc... Use a story it is the number one rule of copyrighting. Better use a professional copyrighter.
I agree. There are very large numbers of people who use computers and find them a complete pain in the arse. This includes most non-technical people using office computers. Most of these people would love a product that "just works" without hassle. And most IT managers would love a product that doesn't need to be continually cossetted my expensive sys admins for it to continue working.