How To Nail Your Next Pitch So Investors Won't Walk Out On You
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Or I guess you could focus on your elevator description of your business and wearing high heels.
No, that's now you nail your business. Nailing a pitch may require those things as well (though apparently not always), but investors are sales prospects and need to be marketed to and sold, just like anyone else.
Nor would I fund a business plan with typos all through it. Clean up your act first, then pitch. At least practice. Why hasn't someone told that poor lady that she doesn't speak right? That's a red flag to me.
It's odd that a pitch about pitches would put that pitch down as an example on the page. It's horrible -- great business or not.