For instance: I see no mention of Tor or VPNs. So this workstation isn't concerned with APT-style threats, or anyone else with the ability to manipulate network connections at a high level. And my quick read sees no talk of memory encryption or any of the physical measures for countering cold-boot scenarios.
This is not a workstation for international (China) travel or for protecting against surveillance. It has some good advice, but is certainly not comprehensive.